First, it was only published as an ebook/short story, but then my lovely publisher talked me into adding a few more chapters and soon it was also available in paperback. Writing Remembering Zane tugged at my heart a few times to the point of tears that I had to walk away and take a break. I'm proud of this story and hope someday to see it as a movie. Wouldn't that be freaking awesome!? :)
So, for those of you, who haven't read Remembering Zane, I'm posting my first chapter. If it tugs at your heart too and you want to read more, you can find it on Amazon and Barnes and Noble and Smashword for a steal of just .99 Paperbacks 9.95
REMEMBERING ZANE
Chapter 1
As soon as Bonnie
Reese opened up the double glass doors she could smell the eucalyptus plant.
She knew the sweet scent all too well. It was Zane’s favorite. Over the years,
it had grown to be her favorite scent, too. And now…standing here in the foyer….smelling
it’s sweet aroma…it became overwhelming. The reality was finally setting in.
“Hello ma’am.” An
older gentleman said, as he greeted her at the door. He held out his arm,
waiting for her to hand over her coat. She smiled weakly at him as slowly
pulled her arms through the sleeves of her black wool coat then handed it to
him. She didn’t know why she wore the heavy jacket. It had been unseasonably
warm for that October, too warm to be wearing it, but then again, it was the
only black jacket she owned. Plus,
she hasn’t been able to shake the chills since the day she got the devastating
news about Zane. That was a week ago.
Tears started to
form when she remembered the day she got the call.
“Bonnie, did you
hear?” Her friend Jackie asked immediately as soon as she answered the phone.
Jackie had been one of her closest friends since elementary school and one of
the few friends that she still kept in contact with.
“Hear what?” Bonnie
asked, as she scrambled to set the last bag of groceries on the kitchen counter.
“Zane Withers, he’s
been in a car accident.” Bonnie could hear the sorrow in Jackie’s voice.
Immediately, her heart sank to the pit of her stomach.
“Wha… what? What
did you say?” Visions of Zane quickly filled her mind. She could see his dark
crew cut hair, his chestnut brown eyes and his warm smile. He had the kind of
smile that would light up any dark room.
“He’s okay, right?”
She choked, blinking away her tears. She remembered the silence on the other
end of the line. That’s when her knees buckled from under her and she collapsed
to the floor, sobbing.
“I’m sorry, Bonnie.
He’s dead.” Jackie said sympathetically. She spoke so low, that Bonnie barely
heard her. She could feel her mind and body float away as she lay sobbing on
the kitchen floor. She didn’t remember hanging up the phone or saying goodbye to
Jackie that day. She didn’t remember much of anything that afternoon except
that it was cold and raining and the only man that she truly ever loved….was
dead.
“Bonnie!” A male
voice hollered her name. She turned around to see Jonathan Wood, one of her old
classmates, walking towards her. Jonathan was Zane’s best friend.
“Hi Jonathan,” she
gave him a weak smile.
“You look lovely.”
He said, smiling. She looked down at her navy blue pant suit and smiled shyly.
She wished she would have worn a black dress, but all the other dresses that
she owned were too bright and colorful.
“Thanks.” She said,
bleakly. Jonathan was dressed in a black suit with a light blue carnation pinned
to his breast. She choked when she saw the blue flower. Blue was Zane’s
favorite color.
She took in a deep
jagged breath and glanced over Jonathan’s shoulder, down the hall. The funeral
home was packed with many of Zane’s friends and family. Some of the faces she
recognized, but a lot of them she didn’t.
“How are you
holding up?” Jonathan asked, taking her arm in his as they walked towards the
crowd. The air felt heavy as she concentrated on her breathing. Each step she
took, her knees became weak and began to shake. She feared that they were going
to buckle from underneath her. She wasn’t sure if she could do this. It had
been a year since she had last seen Zane. Although, she remembered it like it
was yesterday. She was shopping at the mall when she had bumped into him. It
was awkward seeing him with his wife and young son, awkward and devastating for
her that is. She should have been his wife and the little boy, should have been
her son. She cried for two weeks when she saw how happy he was with his new
family.
Bonnie met Zane
Withers when they were in the fourth grade. At ten years old, she didn’t really
understand the concept of love, but she knew that the feelings she had for him
were never going to go away. Ever. It
wasn’t until they were both in eleventh grade, that he finally took an interest
in her. The day that he came and stood by her locker and asked her if she
wanted to go to the movies was forever tattooed to her brain. She could still
smell his sweet aftershave as they sat next to each other watching their movie
together.
And so for the next ten years they were inseparable.
“Bonnie! You came!”
Through her murky eyes, she looked up to see another one of her classmates,
Cindy walking towards her. She struggled to put a smile on her face as the
tears continued to trickle down her cheeks. Jonathan sensed her uneasiness and
wrapped her arm tighter around his.
“Yes. I’m
here…here.” She choked. Cindy grabbed a handful of tissues that were sitting on
a stand beside them and handed them to her. That was one useful thing about
funeral homes they were always well stocked with tissues and set at the most
convenient places.
She sighed and
thanked Cindy for the tissues.
“Follow me if you
want to see him. The line back there is a mile long.” She informed them with a
smile on her face and speaking as if they were getting in line for a rock
concert or something. There was no grief or sorrow in her voice, whatsoever.
Bonnie nodded her head as her and Jonathan followed Cindy down the hall.
Jonathan leaned
over and whispered in her ear, “If you aren’t ready yet we can wait.” She leaned
her head on his shoulder and thanked him for being so understanding. All these
years, Jonathan had always been so nice to her, saying the sweetest things and
always complimenting her, more so than Zane ever did. She could never
understand why he didn’t settle down and gotten married like (gulp) Zane did.
“I don’t want to keep
you from waiting.” She breathed, using the tissues to wipe away the fresh tears.
He smiled shyly at her and squeezed her hand. “I was already in there, earlier,
with his wife and family.” She could see the guilt in his dark blue eyes as he
bowed his head down.
“Oh!” Her lips
formed a perfect ‘O’ when she spoke.
Her heart was
pounding through her chest as they continued to inch their way closer to the room
where Zane laid. She smiled weakly at the unfamiliar faces that walked past
her. Some of them were somber, while others were sobbing uncontrollably.
Her mind raced. All
she knew was that he was in a car accident. She had so many questions. Questions
she wondered if Jonathan knew. Was it a
closed casket? Was she ever going to see his beautiful face again? Maybe
she didn’t want to remember him like this…lying in a casket….dead. Jonathan
looked down at her as if he read her mind.
“You look troubled.
Is there something wrong?” He whispered in her ear. She looked down at the
front of her suit and nervously began to rub at the invisible wrinkles.
“Ho…how does he
look?” She stammered.
“Oh, he looks good,
considering….” He stopped when he saw her green eyes grow wide with shock.
“Considering what?”
She choked. He glanced around the crowded room, making sure that no one was
listening in on their conversation. They all seemed to be in their own little
world, chatting among each other.
“Well….he was
partially ejected from his vehicle.” He spoke low. Her breath caught in her
throat as she started to choke on her tears. She cupped her hands over her
mouth to keep from shrieking, but it was too late. Tears started to stream down
her cheeks as she went into a full blown crying fit. All she could envision was
her beloved Zane bleeding and hanging out of the shattered windshield.
“Oh, my God!” She sobbed as she collapsed in Jonathan’s arms. Some of the people turned
and were staring at the two of them.
“Come on. You’re
not ready to see him yet.” Jonathan said. He wrapped his arms around her waist
and walked her through the glass doors then down the steps and outside to the
other end of the funeral home.
“What exactly happened
to him?” She asked as she continued to sob. She was grateful that Jonathan
brought her outside. The cool breeze felt good against her clammy skin.
“Sit down.” Jonathan
ordered as he pointed at one of the white wicker chair that was in the corner
of the porch. She quietly obliged. He took out a pack of gum from his pocket
and offered her a piece, but she declined. She watched him carefully as he popped
it in his mouth and began chewing vigorously. She could see that he, too, was
having a hard time dealing with the loss of his best friend. She sat quietly,
waiting for him to speak.
“It was cold and
raining that day he was coming home from a football game. From what I was told,
he swerved to miss a deer then his car skidded across the wet slippery leaves
until he hit a tree head on.”
Bonnie felt as if
someone had punched her in the stomach and knocked the breath out of her. She
wrapped her arms around her stomach and slowly began rocking back and forth.
“The ambulance crew
said he was still alive when they got there.”
She bit her bottom
lip to keep from shrieking as she continued to listen to Jonathan. Then he
turned around to stare out at the road in front of the funeral home. Bonnie
could see the pain in his face and that he was hurting. He was having a hard
time talking about it.
“What? What else
happened?” Her voice quivered as she stood up from the chair and walked over to
him. He sucked in a deep breath and grabbed ahold of the railing.
“The ambulance crew
said he was talking and asking for his wife.” He continued. A small tear
trickled down his cheek. Seeing Jonathan cry made her heart ache. She had never
seen him cry before. She reached over and wrapped her arm around his shoulder,
comforting him.
“That’s
understandable.” She said soothingly. Jonathan turned around to face her and
shook his head. “No, you don’t understand. He wasn’t asking for Leanne…he was
asking for you. He kept repeating your name over and over again…Bonnie.” Her
breath and heart stopped at the same time, as she tried to grasp what he had
just said.
“Whaaa….what?” She
stumbled backward and fell into the chair, sobbing uncontrollably.
“Oh Bonnie, I’m so
sorry. I knew I shouldn’t have told you.” He cried, pounding his fists on the
side of his head.
“Dammit! Dammit it
all to hell!” He screamed as he kneeled down in front of her. He grabbed her
ice cold hands, “Bonnie, I’m sorry.” He pleaded.
Bonnie wanted to
stand up and hold Jonathan in her arms and tell him that it was okay…but she
was numb. She felt like she was having an out of body experience. She could see
Jonathan kneeling before her and apologizing, but she couldn’t move. All she
could picture in her mind and hear was Zane’s bloody body calling her name.
“Hey Jon! Are you
alright man?” They both turned around to see Derrick, another classmate and a
good friend of Zane, standing before them.
Jonathan quickly
stood up and wiped the tears from his cheek with the back of his hand. “Yeah
man, I’m good.” He choked. Derrick gave him a peculiar look then turned to look
at Bonnie.
“Hello Bonnie, nice
to see you again.” He said, reaching his hand out for her to shake. She numbly
raised her hand. But was startled when Derrick quickly grabbed her hand and
pulled her out of the chair to give her a hug. The surprise hug brought her out
of her trance.
“I’m so sorry for
your loss, Bonnie.” Derrick whispered in her ear, causing fresh tears to
emerge. Yes, it was my loss too. The man
I was supposed to marry, the man I was to have children with. The man I was
supposed to grow old with until we both died of old age. Her heart ached
for Zane’s wife and their young son, but her heart ached for herself, too. She
loved Zane, more than herself and she always would.
“They are closing
pretty soon. Do you want to see him one more time before you leave?” Derrick
asked. He had no idea that she hadn’t been in there to see him yet. She nodded
quietly then motioned for Jonathan to walk her in. Derrick held the side door
open as they both walked back into the funeral home. The place was quieter now.
There were only a few people left standing in the hallway. She grabbed ahold of
Jonathan’s hands and squeeze tightly hoping it would stop hers from shaking.
Hand in hand, they
slowly walked down the red carpeted hall, towards the small gathering of
people. Right away, Bonnie recognized Zane’s parents. Her heart ached for them.
She could see the grief in their tired old eyes as she walked towards them.
She shuddered when
she caught a whiff of the eucalyptus plant as they walked up to the room where
Zane laid.
“Bonnie! It’s so
nice of you to come.” Zane’s mother, Jean said. She wrapped her frail arms
around Bonnie’s shoulders and hugged her tightly. “I was afraid that you weren’t
going to make it. My Zane would have been disappointed if you hadn’t shown up.”
Her soft voice quivered when she said his name.
“Oh Jean, how could
I not come.” She started to sob, but quickly sucked in a deep breath to keep
the new tears from surfacing. She felt Jonathan’s hand on her shoulder as Jean
continued to hug her. After a long moment Jean finally pulled back to look at
her. “Oh, you look so beautiful.” Jean smiled weakly then gently patted her
cheek.
Jean was a tall
thin woman with grey hair and a button nose. Her thick glasses made her blue
eyes more prominent. She smiled at Jean one more time before turning to Blaine,
Zane’s father, who was standing next to her. Zane was a spitting image of his
father; tall with short dark hair, except his had more grey. The two of them
even had the same brown mole just below their left eye.
“So glad you could
make it.” Blaine said in a deep voice that sounded just like Zane’s. Without
saying a word, she reached up and wrapped her arms around his broad shoulders.
It took everything she had to keep from breaking down in front of him. She knew
this was hard enough on them losing their oldest son that they didn’t need to
see her losing control and sobbing like a baby.
“Are you ready?”
She heard Jonathan ask as he tapped her on the shoulders. She turned around and
watched him hug Jean then turned and shook hands with Blaine one more time.
She blew out a
jagged sigh and nodded her head as they proceeded into the large circular room.
She gasped at the sight. There were flowers everywhere, stacked from floor to
ceiling. Most of them were vibrant colors of fall; orange, yellow and brown, all
but one. There was one green plant sitting on the floor next to the casket. It
was the eucalyptus plant that she had sent. She took in a deep breath and
inhaled its sweet aroma.
Jonathan wrapped
his arm around her shoulder as they proceeded towards the casket. She kept her
eyes peeled to the floor, away from the casket. She was still afraid to look.
She was afraid of how she was going to react once she saw Zane lying in the
casket, lifeless.
“Bonnie!” A female
voice called. She turned around to see who it was that had spoken her name and
gasped when she recognized the woman’s face. It was Leanne, Zane’s wife. Her
heart began to pound against her chest as she stared at the young woman as she
walked towards her. A pang of jealousy hit her when she saw how beautiful Leanne
was with her long wavy dark hair, piercing blue eyes and perfect petite body.
There was no comparison between the two of them. Bonnie was the complete
opposite to her, with her short bleached blonde hair, bright green eyes and
short stocky body. The longer Bonnie stared at the young widow her jealousy
slowly started to fade. She felt remorse and….embarrassed. Did she know that Zane was calling her name out instead of his own
wife’s?
Without saying
another word, Leanne smiled then gently grabbed her arm and walked her to the
casket. Bonnie could barely breathe. What
was she doing? Doesn’t she realize how hard this is for me? I can’t just walk
up to him….like…like this. She swallowed the hard lump in her throat and
stared at her with wide eyes.
“Zane, look who
came to see you,” She spoke lovingly to him as if he were still alive. Bonnie
kept her eyes glued on the gold handles in front of the casket as tears started
to trickle down her cheeks. She listened to Leanne talk to him. “Zane, honey,
Bonnie came to see you.”
Leanne turned and
smiled at Bonnie, then patted her hands and walked away, leaving her all alone
beside him. Her body began to shake as she stared at the dark cherry casket and
its gold handles. She could see that the casket was lined with white satin as
she slowly moved her eyes all around except for the one place that she dreaded.
Near the foot of the casket was a small bouquet of black and gold flowers with
a small banner reading #1 fan. She chuckled quietly to herself. Yes, he was a huge Steeler fan.
She quickly shot
her attention upward to the huge bouquet of flowers that were resting on top of
the open casket. It was a huge casket cover of fall flowers. In the center of
it was a yellow banner that read “Son/husband/father”. She shuddered then blew
out another jagged sigh as she slowly moved her eyes downwards. She brought her
fists to her mouth to muffle the small shriek that had escaped her lips. It was
him! It was Zane! He truly was dead! She watched her hands shake as she reached
out to touch him. His face was as white as the satin lining in his casket, his
short dark hair was speckled with grey, but it was him, the same man she had
loved since the fourth grade.
*******
She didn’t remember
the drive home, only walking through the front door of her small apartment and tossing
her black wool coat over the couch. She was still having one of those out of
body experiences, except all she could see was Zane lying in his coffin. He was
wearing his beloved Pittsburgh Steeler jersey that was autographed by Jerome
Bettis and Hines Ward. She remembered that day at the football stadium. They
were both nineteen and full of love and life. Jonathan was with them too. The
three of them had driven to Pittsburgh to watch the first home game of the
season. They were playing against the Baltimore Ravens and the game ended with
the Steelers winning 17 to 7. They had waited 2 hours after the game to get
autographs. She remembered Zane’s dark eyes lit up when Hines Ward signed his
jersey. He was like a little kid on Christmas morning.
The shrill of the
phone brought her back to reality as she pulled herself off the couch to grab
the phone.
“Bonnie, it’s me
Jon. Are you okay? I was worried about you and wanted to make sure that you got
home okay.” A small smile formed on her lips when she heard Jonathan’s voice.
“Yeah, I’m
home….but…I’m not okay. I feel emotionally drained, you know?” She sighed
heavily as she leaned back down on the couch. Her eyes felt puffy and swollen.
She could feel a headache coming on from all the crying she had done tonight.
“Yeah, I know what
you mean. I wanted to tell you that if you ever need someone to talk to, you
know you can call me right?”
“Thank you Jonathan.
I really appreciate that.” She grabbed the black wool coat that was lying on
the arm of the couch and draped it over herself to keep warm. The cold chills
were coming back.
“Bonnie, you can
call me Jon. No one has called Jonathan since high school.” He chuckled
lightly.
“Oh, okay. Old
habits die hard.” She chuckled weakly. “I guess it has been a few years, huh?”
She still had trouble swallowing the idea that they have been out of high school
for fifteen years. It seemed just like yesterday that her, Zane and Jonathan
were cruising around town in Jonathan’s little blue Ford Escort. God! Where did the time go?
For a moment, there
was silence on the phone. Just as Bonnie was about to say something, Jon
finally spoke.
“Bonnie, I was
wondering…wo…would you like to go out for dinner this weekend?” He stammered.
The corner of her
mouth curled up as she felt flattered that Jonathan, er’ Jon, wanted to take
her out to dinner. She was just as about to open her mouth and say yes, but she
then stopped. What about Zane? Would he
mind her going out on a date with his best friend? Tears started to cloud
her vision as she sat up on the couch and stared at the blank television.
“Uh…Jonath...Jon, I
really appreciate you wanting to take me out for dinner, but I really wouldn’t
be much company right now.” She sighed heavily as she glanced around her small
living room. It felt empty and lonely….like her.
“Nonsense…we can
talk about old times…in honor of Zane. What do ya say?” He tried to sound
enthusiastic, but deep down he was nervous as hell. He never told a soul that
he had loved Bonnie since the 7th grade. Since the day of the spring
dance when she walked into the gymnasium wearing a mint green dress. He
remembered how beautiful her hair looked, all curly, framing her chubby cheeks
and just enough makeup to bring out her bright green eyes and pink full lips.
He wanted to tell her that day that she was beautiful and ask her to dance with
him, but couldn’t, not when she was in the arms of his best friend Zane.
“Since you put it
that way, I guess we could have dinner…in honor of Zane.” She chuckled weakly.
Just thinking about him made her heart ache. She glanced at the clock on the
wall. By this time tomorrow he would be buried six feet into the ground and
covered with dirt. She took in a jagged breath and could feel another crying
fit coming on.
“I gotta go. I will
call you tomorrow.” She told Jon then quickly hung up. She spent the remainder
of the evening curled up on the couch, crying over the love she had lost
forever.
